I found myself sitting with my guitar this morning and writing a song. Then i realized that it has been way too long since I have done that sort of thing. So I took the time to slap a recording together of my newly born song.
Please click the link to listen and offer some advice...
example: put a bridge after the second verse that sums up the premise of the song.
example 2: try to suck less and rock more!
example 3: make the lyrics more universal.
I am hoping for feedback via "songwriter's circle" here so please let me know what you think of this track and I'll be sure to follow.
cheers
Jay
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Cheryl and I on a tandem bike we rented on Cat Ba Island, Vietnam during our wonderful honeymoon
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